Friday, August 21, 2020

At home with Beatrice

 


What an interesting photo Beatrice.
Do you ever go across the stepping stones when the water is low?
That would be pretty exciting.

Great use of full stops, remember to put a full stop at the end.  

Well done, 3 sentences Beatrice.


3 comments:

  1. Beatrice I really enjoyed reading your story, you used some really interesting words like 'noticed' and 'covered'. Going for a walk can give us such great ideas to write about!

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  2. Hi Beatrice, thank you for sharing the photo and your writing with us. Your sentences are clear and easy to read - great work!

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  3. What a great story Beatrice. I like how you used full stops in the right places.

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